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ELA Lesson/unit #3 developed at the D&D Year-end Meeting, June 1, 2000

 
A Snapshot in Time
Grade Level(s): Upper Elementary
English Proficiency Level: all (with appropriate modifications)
Duration: 1 - 2 weeks 
Materials: The Relatives Came or any authentic literature in past tense; guidelines/checklists for editing writing; language experience charts; dictionaries; writing journals. 
NYC English Language Arts (ELA)Standard Addressed: Conventions, Grammar and Usage E4a: demonstrate a basic understanding of the rules of the English language ... E4b: Analyze and subsequently revise work to improve its clarity and effectiveness. 
Effective Practices for ELL Framework: George Washington University (GWU) Guiding Principle #2: ELLs will develop full receptive and productive proficiencies in English in the domain of ...writing consistent with expectations of all students. 
Activity Description: 

Aims

- to develop standard usage of the simple present past
- to refine sequencing of events skills
- to identify and refine skills in (details) in a story
- to involve student's family in the child's literacy development
- to have students work collaboratively and share their life experiences orally and in writing

Procedures

The class reads a book such as The Relatives Came that tells a story about something that happened in the past and that uses the past tense throughout.

Teacher may model a short account from his/her life. This may include modeling writing by using a language experience chart.

The teacher elicits oral language from students (preferably in small groups) while scaffolding, providing and clarifying the language as needed, about an experience from the student's own life.

For beginning level ELL students, a story starter may be useful, i.e. (Last week my family...) or (One time I went to a ...) or (In my country I liked to...) etc.

Students may dictate the beginning of an account (the main idea) to the teacher. More advanced students may begin to outline the story using a bullet list.

Students may then pair up to refine each other's work.

Students may then be assigned to go home and ask family members for a full account of this event. They may take notes in their native language if appropriate.

Students bring in additional information and begin a first draft. Process writing engages them in editing and revising their accounts, both individually and in pairs. 

Assessment: Individual and peer use of writing checklist, peer final critque, teacher's evaluation rubic, standard (report grade), published work. 
How Activity embodies the Framework: It provides an interactive and integrated approach to developing standard conventions of grammar that validates all students' experiences and backgrounds.

It is designed to directly address Principle 2.5 which asserts the holistic nature of effective language acquisition by integrating the use of various modes of learning.

The activity also greatly develops Principle 2.6 as it engages students in the full range of language uses, "including social communication as well as advanced academic and technical uses..."

It reinforces the importance of bringing parents and the home into the learning process: Principle 2.9.

By designing an activity that provides high motivation for students (recognizing the importance of their experiences) it addresses Principle 2.10 in actively engaging all students in high level of language usage... It also allows for the use of the native language to then be transferred into written English, and finally a published product is available to be shared with all.


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